New Animatic for New Thesis

So, over the summer I decided that my old idea just wasn't working for me anymore, so I started over. Truth be told, I like this idea a lot more. I feel it works well in short form, and I think it will be easier and more fun to work on. If you have seen Jiri Trnka's "The Hand", that kind of surreal, theme driven appraoch is what I was going for, except different in execution and with a slightly lighter tone. Take a look, and any feedback is appreciated.